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Which of the following would NOT improve the rhythm of prose?

Aa variety in the length of sentences

Balways using short, choppy sentences

Cusing sentences with different structures

Dword choice

Verified Answer :

B would make the prose more difficult to read and thus interrupt the natural rhythm

Answer:

B. always using short, choppy sentences

Explanation:

Using short and choppy sentences  can make your writing appear unsophisticated and your ideas seem disconnected. One can use a modifying phrase to reduce the usage of short and choppy sentences

e.g I was exhausted. I stared at the page. I was unable to comprehend a single word.  can be well written as

Exhausted, I stared at the page, unable to comprehend a single word.

you can as well try starting your sentences with simple subject, a

prepositional phrase, a dependent clause, a modifying phrase, etc.