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Do you think this poem is bad?


Your smile brightens my day


I love you Casey McMenamin with all my heart

sitting here at my desk thinking about you

i wish it could be you and me

that would make me happy

to share feelings with you at my desk

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jae171

it's pretty good,
instead of saying 'I love you Casey McMenamin with all my heart' you could just begin the poem with 'Sitting here at my desk thinking about you'
but if you feel you like your version better then go for it

lovejuless99

It's not bad . Personally I would change a few things , but i like it. Is this for an assignment or for personal use?

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