The first time I rode a roller coaster, I was nine years old. I remember feeling both terrified and excited. I had goosebumps, and the hairs on my arms were standing straight up. My sister and I waited in line for an hour, which only made me more nervous.
Which sentence is the best example of a vivid sensory detail?
I'd say the third sentence.
'I had goosebumps, and the hairs on my arms were standing straight up'
That has the most imagery.
Which sentence is the best example of a vivid sensory detail?
I'd say the third sentence.
'I had goosebumps, and the hairs on my arms were standing straight up'
That has the most imagery.