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Look at the following short outline for an explanatory essay. How would you improve it?


Claim: The Aztec Empire achieved greater developments in government, society, and culture than the Inca Empire.


I. Introduction

II. Aztec Empire

APolitical Developments
BSocial Developments
CCultural Developments

III. Conclusion


A.Use more colorful language.

B.Have the conclusion immediately following the introduction

C.Introduce new arguments in the conclusion.

D.Add a section about the Inca Empire.