I wake up some nights and wish I had you

I need a reason to smile

You were my smile

I tried to be strong

Then what did I do

What have I done

There's no one to keep me warm

At night, when I wake up I wish it was you

Oh my what have I done

All these lonely nights to think

To think about the birds

And the boats

Man it's crazy in my mind without you

And some nights I rule the world

But most night I'm haunted

I feel like I'm falling

It's a deep black hole

And now I'm waiting for you

Baby, I said that I still love you

And you said that doesn't make a difference

You say we are destructive to each other

But don't you see, it's destroying me to not have you





would u change anything about this poem i just wrote and if so what and why?