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Which excerpt from a student essay maintains the most objective tone?

AElisa takes great pride in her abilities as a gardener, which was obvious to me because of the careful way she tends her garden.
BThe careful way that Elisa tends her garden was amazing to me and shows her great pride in her abilities.
CThe careful way Elisa tends her garden reveals that she takes great pride in her abilities as a gardener.
DI think the careful way that Elisa tends her garden reveals that she takes great pride in her abilities as a gardener.

Verified Answer :

it is C.The careful way Elisa tends her garden reveals that she takes great pride in her abilities as a gardener

Which excerpt from a student essay maintains the most objective tone?

C. The careful way Elisa tends her garden reveals that she takes great pride in her abilities as a gardener.

An objective tone means the author of the essay is not sharing her/his personal opinion, bias or judgment about a subject, but presenting the information impartially.

The remaining options have a subjective tone, through the use of the pronouns "me" or "I", which indicate the student is presenting a personal opinion about Eliza.