Which sentence has the most traditional syntax?
The mother, twisting and waiting quietly, her ring circled a pale finger.
The mother waited quietly, twisting her ring around a pale finger.
Waiting quietly and twisting her ring, the mother had a pale finger.
With quiet waiting, the mother twisted her ring around a pale finger
The mother, twisting and waiting quietly, her ring circled a pale finger.
The mother waited quietly, twisting her ring around a pale finger.
Waiting quietly and twisting her ring, the mother had a pale finger.
With quiet waiting, the mother twisted her ring around a pale finger