In the example below, how does the difference between the character's spoken words and internal thoughts affect the story?
I smiled. "I'm doing great! How are you?" This smile is breaking my face; tears will flood me; I'm going to collapse like a bridge in an earthquake.
AIt creates dramatic tension.
BIt introduces a new character.
CIt ties up the loose ends.
DIt changes the point of view.
I smiled. "I'm doing great! How are you?" This smile is breaking my face; tears will flood me; I'm going to collapse like a bridge in an earthquake.
AIt creates dramatic tension.
BIt introduces a new character.
CIt ties up the loose ends.
DIt changes the point of view.