Which of the following is the clearest and most effective sentence?
AJohn is a man with a sister who is attractive, and they both went to a party together.
BThe party included attractive females of all ages, and one was a sibling of a man known as John.
CThe sister of John was attractive more than others who attended a party.
DJohn's sister was the prettiest girl at the party.
Student Answer: B
Answer: Incorrect
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- Revision involves
Achecking for correct capitalization.
Bbeing consistent with paragraph indentation.
Cchecking for repeated words and confused words.
Dclarifying purpose and meaning.
Student Answer: C
Answer: Incorrect
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- Which sentence contains a prepositional phrase?
AThey sang it, then sang it again.
BWith the proper help, they'll complete the project early.
CThey tried, although they didn't expect to win.
DRunning all the way, he got there early.
Student Answer: C
Answer: Incorrect
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